Tuesday, January 4, 2011
BATTLE WITH SWIFTCLAN!!!!
WE HAVE A BATTLE WITH SWIFTCLAN!!!!!! THEY DON'T WANT US TO DRIVE THEM OUT!! COMMENT ON WHAT U DID!!! IMPORTANT: This is the same battle we had earlier. I am going to copy the comments from there and bring them here. I will put the cat who wrote it's name at the bottom of the comment.
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Leafwing wondered why there were so many battles in a short period of time. Why do the other clans hate us so much? Oh well. She leaped over Greyflight who was struggling with the Swift clan Deputy, Ravenclaw. The deputy spun around and started clawing at Leafwing. "OH NO YOU DON'T!!!" Greyflght issed. Then he leaped onto Ravenclaw's back and started digging his hind claws into the deputys spine. All of a sudden the deputy reared up and fell on top of Greyflight. "NO" Leafwing shouted. She ran over to Greyflight and called for Snowpetal. Snowpetal hurried over and inspected Greyflight. "Help me bring him to the cave!" Snowpetal said around Greyflight's Fur. Leafwing helped Snowpetal carry Greyflight over to the cave. Once inside, Leafwing bent over Greyflight. I will get him. I will get Ravenclaw!! She promised. as she walked out of the cave.........
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Me and Nettleclaw fought side by side. Our apprentices had begged to come but we said that they hadn't had enough battle training. "NO!!!" Nettleclaw yelled. He was looking at Greyflight who was underneath the SwiftClan deputy Ravenclaw. I watched as Ravenclaw ran away and Snowpetal dragged Greyflight into a small cave. Nettleclaw bounded away and attacked Ravenclaw, racking his claws down his ears. I yowled in rage as Ravenclaw bit into Nettleclaws scruff and blood trickled down Nettleclaws neck. Ravenclaw heard me and dropped Nettleclaw to the forest floor. I ran straight for him and bit into one of his leg. Ravenclaw hissed and racked a claw across my eye. Rosepetal who had been scanning around the battle for injuries, saw Nettleclaw, and ran to the den with Nettleclaw behind her. Ravenclaw took my elapse of pressure and pinned me to the ground. I hissed defiance at him. "So Moontail." He hissed at me. " What are you going to do now?" "THIS!!!" I yowled back and jumped into the air with all my strenght and landed plainly on his back. Not knowing what had happened, Ravenclaw panicked. He tried to get me off his back but I held on. Then I jumped off and grabbed his leg tendon and waited for him to collapse. I rolled away from him as he swiped a clumsy claw at me and bit his tail. He yowled for help and 3 different warriors and 2 apprentices leaped on top of me. I wriggled under them and bit into an apprentices scruff who sprang away yeowling. I pummled a warriors chest who hissed and bit my tail. I hissed defencivly and kicked again. I knew I wouldn't win this battle with out help. I was slowly growing weaker.
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I woke up in a little cave far off from the battle. Wait! where am I? I was frantic. As I tried to sit up my leg jolted with a pain I hadn't thought was real. My eyes blurred. I lay down again, knowing i couldn't move. Then... a screech sounded from outside the den. It was the most HORRIBLE screech you have ever heard. MOONTAIL!! I knew I had to help her. I could sense no cat was around to help besides me. I sat up again, trying to ignore the trobbing pain in my leg. I struggled onto three paws and took a wobbly step. I fell flat to the ground. The pain was starting to blind me. I HAD to try again. I dragged myself out of the cave despite the pleading of my limb. The screech came again, now more frantic. Moontail was going to die if I didn't come.i struggled to my paws once more, the pain leaving me senseless and unalble to see. "MOONTAIL!!" I hobbled over as close as I could but i couldn't balance. I HAD to put weight on my hurt leg. Once i did, I felt myself falling into a faint. The pain was so unbearable, I couldn't even hear or smell! All I could do was keep moving forward... whichever way was forward! My paws couldn't even feel the ground. My head started to pound. Finally, a tiny scent came through my nostrils... Moontail! There was another scent, too. SWIFTCLAN. That was closer than Moontail. Where was Nettleclaw, anyway? Shouldn't he be with her? I lashed out, claws flying, at the SwiftClan scent. I started to whither.. Then I barely felt the essence of me flying through the air. Which way was up? Which way was down?!?! I hit something hard with a thud- Right on my leg. As my ears flick open for one, tiny moment, I heard the loud crack of my leg... and my head. Instantly, I fell into darkness hoping only one thing: Moonfur was okay.
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Hehe Greyflgiht you accidently got it wrong. Its Moontail! :D Never mind I knew it was me.
ReplyDeleteI saw what happened to Greyflight. THE FOOL!! He could have just let me die! He SHOULD of! I found the strength I needed to get up and help Greyflight. I ran over and sat with him. I could see his chest rising and falling quickly. I saw Leafwing who rushed over. "WHAT DID YOU DO MOONTAIL!!" She hissed at me. "WHY DIDN'T YOU STOP HIM FROM GETTING OUT OF THE CAVE!!" I felt so bad. But then my fury began to spiral along side hers. "DID YOU THINK I COULD!! NO ONE WAS AROUND TO STOP HIM!! I COULDN'T DO ANYTHING BECAUSE I WAS TRYING TO FIGHT MY WAY OUT OF THOSE CATS!!" I flicked my tail towards the SwiftClan cats who were slowly sneaking closer. "OH AND ANOTHER THI..." Me and Leafwing looked at each other and then hissed in defiance at the SwiftClan cats as we ran around to protect Greyflight. Then they leaped at us. Me and Leafwing fought hard but once again they're was no one else to help us. But suddenly their was a loud yowl behind us. I caught the scent....SUNCLAN!!!!
I woke up in a small cave with the tangy aroma of herbs in the air. I got up panicky. What had happened during the battle when I was gone? What had happened to my beloved mate? I tried to get up and get out into the battle again but I was stopped by Rosepetal. "No Nettleclaw. You haev to stay here for a while. Im going to put some cobwebs on your wound so sit still." I did as I was told and sat still. She placed something sticky on my wound to hold it in place. "Can I go into the battle now?" I asked impatiently. "No you can't Nettleclaw." I whipped my head around as Snowpetal walked into the cave. "WHY NOT!!" I yowled. "Because your not ready yet!!" Snowpetal spat back at me. "Now be responsible and stop complaining!" Snowpetal stalked out of the cave and Rosepetal just shook her head at me. I sighed "Im sorry about that Rosepetal. It's just I'm worried about Moontail. When I left the battle I saw cats jumping all over her. I hope she's alright." I looked at Rosepetal. "Is she?" "Don't worry Nettleclaw. She's fine." I let out a sigh of relief and then Rosepetal snorted. I looked at her and she let out a mrrow of laughter. "She isn't entirely helpless you know Nettleclaw!!" Her body was still shaking with laughter when she turned around to look at her herbs again. I knew that Rosepetal was right, but I still couldn't help worrying. Rosepetal flicked up her ears to a loud yowl. What was going on now?
ReplyDeleteThis comments is by Maplestar, leader of Sunclan:
ReplyDeleteI lead my clan into this battle because I know we needed to help. All the warriors and a few apprentices have come, and all yowled at once, as they approached battle. All of a sudden everything stopped cats from Silverclan, and Swiftclan gazed up at us, who were standing on top of the hill. "Silverclan, we have come to assist you in battle! We mean no harm to Silverclan." Our deputy Hollyfrost yowled. "You can't do that, Silverclan fights alone," I heard various voiced from Silverclan reply. "Oh well, we come to help and join in this battle and you can't stop us!" One of our warriors Dawnstripe meowed in an upset way. And with that we dove off the hill and began to attack the Swiftclan cats. I knew this was a much harder battle then I had ever expected.
-Maplestar
(this is continued from my last comment):.... I dashed out of the cave, I vowed to Greyflight I would get Ravenclaw and I will. When I spotted his black pelt against the snow, I leaped on top of him.I tore at is ears and neck. "LEAVE GREYFLIGHT ALONE!" I hissed. I fought and fought. He was putting up quite a fight untill I saw Greyflight collapse. "GREYFLIGHT!!!!" I screeched! I ran over to him. He was unconcious. I dragged him back to the medicine cat cave. Then Snowpetal got mad at me! "WHAT WAS HE DOING OUT THERE???? WHY DID YOU LET HIM OUT???" "I-I-I don't know! I was fighting! I didnt see him untill he collapsed!"
ReplyDeleteI saw the arguemnt with Leafwing and Snowpetal. "HEY!" I yowled to them. The swung around to look at me. "IT WASN'T HER FAULT! GREYFLGIHT WAS TRYING TO HELP ME SO IF YOUR GOING TO GET MAD AT SOMEONE GET MAD AT ME!!" My neck fur was bristling and I forced myself to put it down. "We shouldn't be fighting! We need to go and fight Greyflight is here now so he should be alright." I flicked my tyail onto Leafwings shoulder and she glanced greatfully at me for stopping the fight. We ran into battle and met up to fight side by side with our friends Leafheart and Rainclaw. Leafwing was bristling with fury at Ravenclaw, the SwiftClan deputy. I stood beside Leafwing with my fur fluffed out, making me look twice as large. I ran up to Ravenclaw twisted and kicked her paws out from underneath. Ravenclaw fell to the ground. Leafwing bit her tail and ravenclaw let out a yowl of pain. Then Rainclaw and Leafheart came out of no where and tucked and rolled with such might that it looked as if they might flatten Ravenclaw. Leafwing yowled in triumph as Ravenclaw turned tail with a hiss. We're wining the battle!! I thought happily.
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